Road Sign Redux
Help! I'm stuck in the box. Click me out, please!
I started the one below--but I could not finish it
KEEP RIGHT
EXCEPT TO PASS
Did you ever wonder,
"Except to Pass" where there are no cars?
Somewhere on that forgotten road
The smell of death lingers
She was this baby's breath flower
The future could not fathom
her gilded gaze nor her septic curse
So fate decided the shock value
Would awaken the almost dead
Long enough to read the signs
Placed there like broken fragments
of Broken dreams and broken hearts
Left to swelter at noon day
While the desert heat does its work
... Carries the eagle ever higher
Brings the scavengers from nowhere
Launched by a hormone quest
Her innocent flippancy
was
Spent too hastily on a pickup seat
To damn many things happening this week--the OLPC G1G1 order arrived Tuesday.
Labels: 19dec07, poetry, poetry_thur, totally optional
posted by HL | 5:51 PM
6 Comments:
There's some good images in there.
Great. I really got this (grin).
Did you ever wonder,
"Except to Pass" where there are no cars?
got pulled over once for changing lanes on a desolate highway with no signal... asked the cop to whom i was signaling,, and he let me go... duh...
the box wont load,, so i will have to go back and see if i can try that part again....
This is visual as a video! And, yes, one wonders, wonders and wonders...
I liked the unfinished poem. It is like life..always unfinished...
rooted
reading room
Hi. Dada diddle diddle dum dum dada, very smart man, level 9 advice, most people in here struggle to understand or want to hear even level one advice, i am having a crisis of faith in focusing my writing efforts on the bloggosphere, irelevancy I know, anyway, mindfulness meditation seemed almost what your advice was, and unique perspective, anyway rage on i say,
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